Letter of Persuasion

We are running the stall for 'Sponge the Teacher' at the fair and without teachers we might have a problem! We are carefully crafting persuasive letters to convince them to help us out. Oliver has created a first draft already, most of it at home, and as a a class we gave him some feedback. We particularly liked the linking sentence of the first paragraph. Awesome effort Oliver! Please note the suggesting function on Google Docs, all Oliver has to do it click on the tick and it makes the changes - very clever!!